写作在中考或者期末考中，都占着极大的比重，所以六年级生要趁着空闲时间多磨炼写作文笔。下面是小编给大家整理的六年级优秀写作，供大家参阅!

六年级优秀写作：看雨

I like the rain, the rain sounds like a harmonious melody. Before it began to rain, the weather is unusually hot, the wind gently across the world, leaves rustling, constantly swaying branches; Wind rustled river quietly, suddenly river like a broken mirror, fish kept out of the water. The clothes are from time to time shaking, as if to say: "it's going to rain! Accept clothes!" Industrious hostess can skillfully to accept clothes, smiled and said, "there is a fresh scent of the wind..."

Rain, at this time or drizzle, naughty light rain cloud mother's arms, falling, some on the canopy, "flutters!" A jump into the soil, some on the colourful umbrella, others fell on the kid's tender hands, listen to their laughter like wind chimes... Rain increases gradually, the size of soybean raindrops fell on the ground, a "tick tock" sound, the grass with a small towel, said to himself: "I love to take a bath, the skin is very good, la la la la!" At that time, there was a "river flutters!" Baby turned out to be a raindrop paddle and splashing crystal waves... Kid dozen umbrella dance in the rain, the beautiful dance, let a person can't help rooting. Suddenly, thunder and lightning thunder, thunder male hard drums banging his thunder day, torrential rain, such as a waterfall, "great!" The rain on the canopy, "tick, tick!" Rain splashed on the boat deck, tick tock, gather together an compactness symphony. People are hiding in the house, the bird flew into the nest, waiting for the rain to stop...

The rain becomes gradually, the rain has stopped, open the window, the fresh air, sunshine, wind river quiet, people go out to walk, and back to the scenery of the past.

六年级:刘荣盛

六年级优秀写作：the false illiterate

One winter morning, in a small bus station was packed with men, women and children. Depend on the railing of the sign clearly marked "" mother and son get on the bus. Stand here and not holding the child's mother, ran is a few men.

The real mother be pushed aside. Emaciated mother scarf, dressing gown, holding a newborn baby, frozen huddled, helplessly looking at those "fault line" male compatriots, out of resentment and helpless look on his eyes. I think that those guys really don't see the words on the sign? Don't really know "mother and son get on the car place" the five eye-catching dazzling word?

You see, the first man, taller, he wore a big fur jacket, wearing a pair of shiny leather shoes, seems very rich. His eyes stared at the ground, and seemed to understand that this is "mother and son get on the car place" dare not up the looks.

The second is a tall man, he was wearing a fur collar fur clothing, wearing a hat, looked forward, his eyes tight shut, what seemed to be thinking, as if in repose.

The third is an old man with silver hair, was short and wore a down jacket, a pair of glasses hung baggily about him on the nose, is about to slide down.

Fourth is tall man, dressed in a turtleneck big leather coat, wearing a big mask, as if to face all cover.

To see how splendid they wear, but on the surface of the gorgeous how to hide the ugly heart?

See the half closed eyes, to see the fast drop glasses as illiterate?

They mainly want to get a seat on early, shrugged off brand that stood, was carrying a conscience to make such as wicked things, etc. And the next to mother and child is against the cold wind trembling, mother heart cold.

I really want to ask the distinguished gentlemen, don't you wife and children? You stand in the place where you should not stand, is the heart not jump, face not red?

In today's society, we like this team there is a growing, more and more people like this, nothing new. They are all for the sake of personal interests to make anything against conscience, already forget yourself or Chinese people. I really want to shout: "please don't do this, you want to be treated, to abide by social morality".

六年级:郑庆桥

六年级优秀写作：my thoughts for spelling bee

On Thursday, the eighteeneh of December, in SUIS—wanyuan, we had Spelling Bee Final Competiti-on! We went to the hall to hold the competition because it was very important that everyone in Grad-e Six must go to the hall to watch the competition.

At half past ten a.m., we were holding the competition. It was very exciting. The all eighteen contes-tants were on the stage of the hall. Miss Louise and Mr Rex were sitting on the chair and giving the S-pelling Bee Words to contestants to spell. We were all very excited but also very nervous because we were so afraid to leave the competition during the earlier stage.

I was Number Eleven. So I had some time to prepare. When Number Ten finished, my heart began to beat very quickly. One of the rules is: Each contestant has only thrity seconds to spell the word. W-hen I had no idea of the words that the teacher had given tome, I used the little spare time to guess.‘Cushion!’suddenly, Miss Louise said. I was shocked when I heard this word and I was afraid I spelt it in the wrong way. I did not want to waste any time given, and I did not care any mistakes. So I tho-ught about the word for one second and then I spoke out my mind loudly:‘C-U-S-H-I-O-N’. And t-hen Miss Louise siad‘Correct!’Everyone in 6c cheered at me. I was also very excited because I pass-ed the first turn of Spelling Bee!

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But the sad story happened at last. I lost the competition because of the word‘convenience’! I w-as very sad and diappointed when I went down the stage and then I cried. I could have spelt the wor-d but I was so careless that I missed an‘n’. Miss Louise gave me another chance, and then I spelt it again. But Miss Apple rang the bell while I was still spelling the word. Ringing the bell means this con-testant needs to leave the competition. When Miss Louise and Mr Rex said I shouid leave the compet-ition, I was shocked, Miss Dolly was shocked, Miss Daphne was shocked, and all of my classmates were shocked, too! I felt so sorry to them and it was all my mistake ... Finally, I only got the ninth positi-on! Oh no! I think I could at least in top three ...

This is the first time for me to join the Spelling Bee Final Competition but I should not have made s-uch very little mistakes. Also here, I want to say thank you to Miss Dolly, Miss Daphne and all of my classmates. Thank you for giving me the chance, thank you for your encouragement, and thank you f-or you for the trust! Without your support, I could not have gone thus far!

Maybe I let you disappointed because of my behavior. I did not do well in the competition. Sorry for that! If you have any advice, please tell me. Maybe I can correct the mistakes. I Hope I can do better next year!

Thank you very much!

六年级:裴家瑶

六年级优秀写作：有趣的四季

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. In spring. The weather is warm. I like to plant tree. I like to fly a kite. I like a walk in the field .In summer. The weather is hot. I like to swim in the sea. I like to eat ice cream. In autumn. The weather is cool.I can see leaves turn red and yellow. I can eat many apples . In winte. The weather is coid,. I like to make snowmen, I like to snowball fights and friends.

I love the fun four seasons。

六年级:孟江龙

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