给几篇高一水平的英语作文，你们能够挑出它们的错误并进行改正吗?下面是小编给大家整理的高一英语作文范文改错，供大家参阅!

高一英语作文范文改错1

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

答案：

1.have去掉 2.about后的you改为me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning

5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an

9.at→in 10.where后加there

高一英语作文范文改错2

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

答案：

1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in„为固定短语， “对„„感兴趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。

高一英语作文范文改错3

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

答案：

1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确 10.and改为or

高一英语作文范文改错4

I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

答案：

the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.

去掉had 7.去掉but

8.去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her

高一英语作文范文改错5

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

答案：

who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate改为immediately 10.fire前加the