作文改错很容易混淆，总觉得哪个都对，其实不是哦。下面是小编给大家整理的一些初中英语书面表达与改错，供大家参阅!

书面表达与改错篇1：

I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________

such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________

songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________

interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________

to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________

and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________

able to improving the friendship between China and7.________

the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________

And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________

harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!10.________

答案与解析：

1.hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。

2.piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。

3.去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。

4.√

5.But→So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。

6.west→western 依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。

7.improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。

8.hoped→hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。

9.去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。

10.how→what no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。

书面表达与改错篇2：

My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________

and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________

will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________

have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________

as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________

think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________

we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________

and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________

medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________

some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________

答案与解析：

1.am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。

2.but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。

3.删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。

4.spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。

5.had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。

6.what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。

7.them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。

8.possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。

9.prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。

10.√

书面表达与改错篇3：

After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________

take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

答案与解析：

1.去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。

2.month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。

3.interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。

4.him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。

5.do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。

6.√

7.beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

8.will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。

9.surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。

10.said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。