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Hi！Tom,

I’m glad that you had a nice birthday party last week. Now I’ll tell you something about how I celebrate my birthday.

I often celebrate my birthday with my parents and friends.I often have a birthday party.My parents buy me a birthday cake and some delicious foods.Many friends come to my home.They send me many presents.We sing and dance.We eat food and fruit and play games together.We often have a good time.

Among all the birthday presents that I received, my favourite one is a special calendar designed by my parents, because there are family pictures taken during the whole year and words with encouragement.

I hope everyone has a good time every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

提分要点：

本文层次分明，行文流畅，句式结构完整、正确，要点齐全。简单句、并列句和复合句的并用，也是本文的亮点。另外复杂句Among all the birthday presents that I received, my favourite one is a special calendar designed by my parents, because there are family pictures taken during the whole year and words with encouragement.中，不但出现了定语从句that I received和作定语的过去分词短语designed by my parents及 taken during the whole year，同时还包含了because引导的原因状语从句，这也是本文的提分点。

积累卡片：

好词

1. play games做游戏

2. have a good time玩得愉快

3. the whole year一整年

好句

1. My parents buy me a birthday cake and some delicious foods. 我父母为我买生日蛋糕和美味食品。

2. Among all the birthday presents that I received, my favourite one is a special calendar designed by my parents, because there are family pictures taken during the whole year and words with encouragement. 在我所收到的礼物中，我最喜欢的是父母为我设计的一本特殊日历，因为上面有一年中所拍摄的家庭照片和激励的语言。

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